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류건우/2024-06-18
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q: What are some items that are best when store-bought or homemade?
A: I think the best item when store-bought is the gadgets.
Basically, gadgets have a lot of functions, and they also require accurate techniques, so it's really hard or impossible to make it in home.
And I think the foods that can easily made in home are the best items when homemade.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!
2. Basically, gadgets have a lot of functions, and they also require accurate techniques, so it's really hard or impossible to make it in home.
3. And I think the foods that can easily made in home are the best items when homemade.
Thank you for answering your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think the best item when store-bought is the gadgets.
>> I think the best items when store-bought are gadgets.
2. Basically, gadgets have a lot of functions, and they also require accurate techniques, so it's really hard or impossible to make it in home.
>>Basically, gadgets have a lot of functions, and they also require accurate techniques, so it's really hard or impossible to make them at home.
3. And I think the foods that can easily made in home are the best items when homemade.
>>Also, I think the foods that can be easily made at home are the best items when homemade.
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