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How can you change the mind of a person who doesn't like Korean food?

이승훈/2025-01-13

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Well..Korea have to many delicious and diverse food. but also i don't like among korea food too. but i like most korean food. korean food dislike person should be recomend very delicious korean food. first food is Bulgogi. Bulgogi are pork and beef main materials. and plus many vegetables, delicious source.(any spicy) fisrt i have to introduce only delicious food. so a person who doesn't like Korean food will trust me. so my plan half way to success. second, introducing Hardcore Korean food. i have to apeal very strongly to person. "this food is Uniq korean food and very delicious." but if person don't like uniq food, i will appolize and i don't force. i feel forcing food don't effective in my life. as i grow older and older, our taste change. so i don't necessary force.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Hun!

Thank you for doing your homework, I agree! Starting your recommendation with bulgogi is a good idea since, at least, it is not spicy, because a lot of foreigners are not used to spicy food. I also like that you don’t force them to try the food you recommend if they don’t like it, because people have different tastes, and what’s okay with you might be something they don’t want to eat.

- T. Caitlyn

Well..Korea have to many delicious and diverse food. but also i don't like among korea food too.

>> Well, Korea has many delicious and diverse foods, but I also don’t like some Korean food too.

but I like most Korean food.

>> CORRECT

korean food dislike person should be recomend very delicious korean food.

>> A person who doesn’t like Korean food should be recommended very delicious Korean food.
first food is Bulgogi.

>> The first food is Bulgogi.

Bulgogi are pork and beef main materials. and plus many vegetables, delicious source.(any spicy)

>> Pork and beef are the main ingredients of Bulgogi. It also has many vegetables and a delicious sauce (not spicy).
fisrt i have to introduce only delicious food.

>> First, I have to introduce only delicious food,

so a person who doesn't like Korean food will trust me.

>> CORRECT

so my plan halfway to success.

>> CORRECT

second, introducing Hardcore Korean food.

>> Second, I'll introduce hardcore Korean food.

i have to apeal very strongly to person. "this food is Uniq korean food and very delicious."

>> I have to appeal very strongly to the person: "This food is a unique Korean food and is very delicious."
but if person don't like uniq food, i will appolize and i don't force.

>> But if the person doesn’t like unique food, I will apologize and I won’t force it.
i feel forcing food don't effective in my life.

>> I feel forcing food doesn’t work effectively in my life.

as i grow older and older, our taste change. so i don't necessary force.

>> As I grow older and older, our tastes change, so I don’t necessarily force it.