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Can you share a bad restaurant experience?

이진태/2024-06-18

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When I was high school student, I visited a restaurant. Some restaurant have a special discounted price at specipic time. for example, 3 PM to 5 PM, you can order discounted menu. Anyway, I ordered that menu, but restaurant didn't recieve my order. because time was over. and the owner said so rudely. So, I left the restaurant.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi JT! Thank you for sharing a bad restaurant experience that you had. It's really sad to be treated rudely.

~~Teacher Ryka^^

When I was high school student, I visited a restaurant.
>>When I was a high school student, I visited a restaurant.

Some restaurant have a special discounted price at specipic time. for example, 3 PM to 5 PM, you can order discounted menu.
>>Some restaurants have special discounted prices at specific times. For example, from 3 PM to 5 PM, you can order from a discounted menu.

Anyway, I ordered that menu, but restaurant didn't recieve my order. because time was over. and the owner said so rudely.
>> Anyway, I ordered from that menu, but the restaurant didn't receive my order because the time was over. The owner spoke to me so rudely.

So, I left the restaurant.
>>CORRECT
OR >>Therefore, I decided to leave the restaurant.