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Have you ever seen a piece of art that affected you strongly? What was it?

이진태/2024-06-18

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I can't remember a piece of art that affected me. However, I can remember some movies that I was impressed. I like Christopher Nolan, he is a movie director and he made many films like "Inception" and "Dark knight. He has absolute skils about time relocation in the movie.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey JT! Thank you for sharing a piece of art that has affected you strongly. I think art is different for each person and for you it's from this great person.
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I can't remember a piece of art that affected me.
>> CORRECT
OR >> I don't remember any piece of art that has moved me.

However, I can remember some movies that I was impressed.
>> However, I can remember some movies that impressed me. 

I like Christopher Nolan, he is a movie director and he made many films like "Inception" and "Dark knight.
>> CORRECT
OR >>I really enjoy the work of Christopher Nolan, the director behind movies such as 'Inception' and 'The Dark Knight.'

He has absolute skils about time relocation in the movie.
>>  He has exceptional skills in manipulating time in his movies.
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