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What is traditional food in your country? Can you tell me about it?

이진태/2024-06-18

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I'm telling you about the Kimchi. Kimchi is Korean traditional food. it is not a main dish, it is simillar a salad. So, Koreans enjoy Kimchi everytime with the mainfood like a pork. Usually, Kimchi is made by cabagge and red pepper powder.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey JT! Thank you for talking about a traditional food in your country. Kimchi is indeed one of the most well-known dishes from Korea.
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I'm telling you about the Kimchi.
>>Let me tell you about Kimchi.

Kimchi is Korean traditional food. it is not a main dish, it is simillar a salad.
>>Kimchi is a traditional Korean food. It is not a main dish; it is similar to a salad. 

So, Koreans enjoy Kimchi everytime with the mainfood like a pork.
>>Koreans enjoy Kimchi with every meal, often pairing it with main dishes like pork. 

Usually, Kimchi is made by cabagge and red pepper powder.
>>Kimchi is usually made with cabbage and red pepper powder.
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