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정일환/2024-06-18

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Q : Have you ever had a spontaneous or unplanned vacation? How did it turn out? A : A few years ago, I went hiking by myself spontaneously, but I gave up in the middle because it was hard. The mountain was too high.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Steve! Going hiking alone can be challenging, especially on tougher trails. It's impressive you took the initiative, even if it didn't go as planned. Maybe next time with a bit more preparation or company, you'll reach the top!
~ Teacher Maxine

A few years ago, I went hiking by myself spontaneously, but I gave up in the middle because it was hard.
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OR >> A few years ago, I went hiking by myself spontaneously, but I gave up halfway because it was difficult.

The mountain was too high.
>> CORRECT
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