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What do you think will you be doing five years from now?

정선아/2024-06-18

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
It's great to make an imagination about future. In my case, after five years, I will be rich. Surely, I will have an extra job with a main job. I will make a big money and travel many countries.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Ms. Angela! I can completely relate to you. I mean, who doesn't want to be rich? I'm rooting for you! 
-T. Sonny
It's great to make an imagination about future.
>>It's thrilling to imagine about the future.
In my case, after five years, I will be rich.
>>As for me, I'd be rich five years later.
Surely, I will have an extra job with a main job.
>>Without a doubt, I'd have a main job and an extra job.
I will make a big money and travel many countries.
>>I'd make a lot of money and travel to many countries.
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