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Who is the scariest person you know? Explain your answer.

차진혁/2024-06-16

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I think the scariest person is my teacher when I was in the 3rd grade. First, he often get angry. Second, he treats girls and boys unfairly.

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Who is the scariest person you know? Explain your answer.

I think the scariest person is my teacher when I was in the 3rd grade.

>> I think the scariest person was my teacher when I was in the 3rd grade.

First, he often get angry.

>> First, he often got angry.

Second, he treats girls and boys unfairly.

>> Second, he treated girls and boys unfairly.