These days,many people are interested in cosmetic surgery, it seems to be popular especially in Korea. I think,people tend to be more important to their appearance . So,it might be good or bad, it's also a personal choice. It depend on satisfaction with beauty on themselves.

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These days,many people are interested in cosmetic surgery,

>> These days, many people are interested in cosmetic surgery.
it seems to be popular especially in Korea.

>> It seems to be popular all over the world, especially in Korea.
I think,people tend to be more important to their appearance .

>> I think people put more importance on their appearance.
So,it might be good or bad, 

>> So, it might be good or bad. 
it's also a personal choice.

>> It's just a matter of personal choice.
It depend on satisfaction with beauty on themselves.

>> It depends on how satisfied people are with how they look.