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류건우/2024-06-14

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Q: What are the good and bad points of exams? A: I think the good point of exams is that people can know if they're good at a certain field or not. I think it's actually the point of the exam because a lot of people take exams and compare the results with each other. And I think the bad point is a person can feel burdened before the exams.
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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think the good point of exams is that people can know if they're good at a certain field or not.
>>CORRECT!

2. I think it's actually the point of the exam because a lot of people take exams and compare the results with each other.
>>I think it's actually the point of the exams because a lot of people take them and compare their results with each other.

3. And I think the bad point is a person can feel burdened before the exams.
>>I think the bad point is that a person can feel burdened before the exams.

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