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Why is making eye contact important?

이진태/2024-06-14

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
In the past in Korea, We thought contacting eyes is so rude. Because, it means challeninging to older and it means a signal to want fighting. However many koreans know eye contact is important in a buisness world. It makes me more reliable person to others.
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Hey JT! Thank you for sharing your ideas on why making eye contact is important. 
~~Teacher Ryka^^

In the past in Korea, We thought contacting eyes is so rude. Because, it means challeninging to older and it means a signal to want fighting.
>>In the past in Korea, we thought making eye contact was very rude because it was considered a challenge to older people and a signal that one wanted to fight.

However many koreans know eye contact is important in a buisness world.
>>However, many Koreans now understand that eye contact is important in the business world. 

It makes me more reliable person to others.
>>It helps make me appear more reliable to others.
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