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When do you feel most energized? What do you like to do with that energy?

이진태/2024-06-14

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I usually feel energatic on friday. it's a friday's magic. I feel I have almost three days holidays. so, it could make me feel energatic and happy. On Friday, I usually do more watching tv or playing a game than other days.
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Hey JT! Thank you for sharing the times when you feel most energized. Being energetic is a great feeling to finish a lot of things we enjoy doing!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^

I usually feel energatic on friday. it's a friday's magic.
>>I usually feel energetic on Fridays. It's Friday's magic.

I feel I have almost three days holidays. so, it could make me feel energatic and happy.
>>I feel like I have almost three days of holidays, so it makes me feel energetic and happy. 

On Friday, I usually do more watching tv or playing a game than other days.
>>On Fridays, I usually watch more TV or play more games than on other days.
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