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Procrastinating something

양기연/2024-06-14

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I don't think procrastinating something is good. It has a bad effect on me and some people involved with my work. But sometimes I am tempted to procrastinating what I am doing because I get tired of doing it or I don't want to miss a chance to have a good time with my family or friends. Procrastinating something always makes me uncomfortable. That's why I try not to postpone anything as much as possible.
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Happy Friday, Gi Yean!
Great job! You expressed your thoughts about procrastination well. Procrastination really has a negative implication, especially when it affects not only yourself but also others.
- T. Cailtyn 
I don't think procrastinating something is good. 
>> CORRECT
It has a bad effect on me and some people involved with my work. 
>> CORRECT
But sometimes I am tempted to procrastinating what I am doing because I get tired of doing it or I don't want to miss a chance to have a good time with my family or friends. 
>> But sometimes I am tempted to procrastinate what I am doing because I get tired of doing it or I don't want to miss a chance to have a good time with my family or friends.
Procrastinating something always makes me uncomfortable. 
>> CORRECT
That's why I try not to postpone anything as much as possible.
>> CORRECT
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