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~ Writing Task: Please answer the question: How long does it usually take you to fall asleep? Do you fall asleep immediately? If I can get the ability, one of them I want the ability is to go to sleep right away. Sometimes I fall asleep immediately, but usually I need a few time. There are many reasons why I can't fall asleep right away. I think I'm sensitive when I ready to sleep. So I can't sleep if my bed room temperature is hot, a lot of noise around, or there is a little light. Even, I can't sleep without an sleeping eye mask. And the next reason why I can't fall asleep right away is that I look at my smartphone before I fall a sleep. Often, when I suddenly think of a question things and I search the information at my smartphone before I go to sleep, time goes too quickly. So my sleep time is shortened.
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Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
How long does it usually take you to fall asleep? Do you fall asleep immediately?


If I can get the ability, one of them I want the ability is to go to sleep right away.
>> If I can get an ability, I want the ability to sleep right away.
Sometimes I fall asleep immediately, but usually I need a few more time.
>> CORRECT!
There are many reasons why I can't fall asleep right away.
>> CORRECT!
I think I'm sensitive when I ready to sleep.
>> I think I'm sensitive when I'm ready to sleep.
So I can't sleep if my bed room temperature is hot, a lot of noise around, or there is a little light.
>> CORRECT!
Even, I can't sleep without an sleeping eye mask.
>> Also, I can't sleep without a sleeping eye mask.
And the next reason why I can't fall asleep right away is that I look at my smartphone before I fall asleep.
>> CORRECT!
Often, when I suddenly think of a question things and I search the information at my smartphone before I go to sleep, time goes too quickly.
>> Often times, when I suddenly think of a question, I search the information at my smartphone before I go to sleep, and time goes by too quickly.
So my sleep time is shortened.
>> CORRECT!