~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
How long does it usually take you to fall asleep? Do you fall asleep immediately?
If I can get the ability, one of them I want the ability is to go to sleep right away.
Sometimes I fall asleep immediately, but usually I need a few time.
There are many reasons why I can't fall asleep right away.
I think I'm sensitive when I ready to sleep.
So I can't sleep if my bed room temperature is hot, a lot of noise around, or there is a little light.
Even, I can't sleep without an sleeping eye mask.
And the next reason why I can't fall asleep right away is that I look at my smartphone before I fall a sleep.
Often, when I suddenly think of a question things and I search the information at my smartphone before I go to sleep,
time goes too quickly.
So my sleep time is shortened.
Hi, Keon!Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
How long does it usually take you to fall asleep? Do you fall asleep immediately?
If I can get the ability, one of them I want the ability is to go to sleep right away.
>> If I can get an ability, I want the ability to sleep right away.
Sometimes I fall asleep immediately, but usually I need a few more time.
>> CORRECT!
There are many reasons why I can't fall asleep right away.>> CORRECT!
I think I'm sensitive when I ready to sleep.>> I think I'm sensitive when I'm ready to sleep.
So I can't sleep if my bed room temperature is hot, a lot of noise around, or there is a little light.
>> CORRECT!
Even, I can't sleep without an sleeping eye mask.>> Also, I can't sleep without a sleeping eye mask.
And the next reason why I can't fall asleep right away is that I look at my smartphone before I fall asleep.
>> CORRECT!
Often, when I suddenly think of a question things and I search the information at my smartphone before I go to sleep, time goes too quickly.>> Often times, when I suddenly think of a question, I search the information at my smartphone before I go to sleep, and time goes by too quickly.
So my sleep time is shortened.