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김지숙/2024-06-13

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

There are so many ways to help the poor. Among them, the way I can do is to donate money to an organization that helps the poor. It's a great help just by donating there.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Great work, Shin Woo! You were able to share your thoughts well. Keep it up!

- Teacher Angela

There are so many ways to help the poor.

>> CORRECT

Among them, the way I can do is to donate money to an organization that helps the poor.

>> Among the ways I can help, I can donate money to an organization that helps the poor.

It's a great help just by donating there.

>> Giving them donation is a great help.