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류건우/2024-06-13

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Q: Why is it important to learn English and Math? A: I think those are important because it's the major subjects. English is the most used language in the world, so if a person learns English, he or she can speak to most people in any country. Also, Math is used in a lot of fields, so it's the first step to learn something.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Paul!

Thank you for doing your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think those are important because it's the major subjects.

>>I think these subjects are important because they're major subjects.

2. English is the most used language in the world, so if a person learns English, he or she can speak to most people in any country.

>>CORRECT!

3. Also, Math is used in a lot of fields, so it's the first step to learn something.

>>CORRECT!