I think skin color is an important factor in someone's image. And obviously there are images that many people prefer. In Korea, people with white skin, small face and thin body are easy to be considered beautiful. Of course people don't think someone beautiful just by this kind of image. Also, skin color that makes someone looks more beautiful can differ by people. Personally, I feel boys with darker skin more handsome. Whereas my friend prefers boys with white skin. So I think skin color affects whether a person is regarded as beautiful and the skin color preferred can differ by culture and people.

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I think skin color is an important factor in someone's image. 

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OR: I believe that skin color plays an important role in someone's image. 

And obviously there are images that many people prefer. 

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OR: Of course, there are images that many people prefer. 

In Korea, people with white skin, small face and thin body are easy to be considered beautiful. 

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OR:  In Korea, people with white skin, a small face, and a thin body frequently are considered to be beautiful. 

Of course people don't think someone beautiful just by this kind of image. 

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OR: Of course, people do not think someone is beautiful based solely on this image. 

Also, skin color that makes someone looks more beautiful can differ by people. 

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OR: Furthermore, the skin color that makes someone appear more beautiful varies between people. 

Personally, I feel boys with darker skin more handsome. 

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OR: Personally, I think boys with darker skin are more handsome. 

Whereas my friend prefers boys with white skin. 

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OR: My friend, on the other hand, prefers white boys. 

So I think skin color affects whether a person is regarded as beautiful and the skin color preferred can differ by culture and people.

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OR: So, I believe skin color influences whether a person is regarded as beautiful, and the skin color preferred varies by culture and people.