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박시연/2024-06-13

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
hello T. Sharon! THis is my homework. Yes, I care what other people think of me. So I live quietly at school. And I care about my appearance. Good night! bye bye!
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Irene!
Please check the corrections.
I know you can get them the next time.
Keep practicing!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Yes, I care what other people think of me.
>> Yes, I care about what other people think of me.
So I live quietly at school. 
>> That's why I just stay quiet in school. 
And I care about my appearance.
>> I also care about my appearance.
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