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What celebrations do you really look forward to? Why?

김명기/2024-06-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I really look forward to Chuseok. In general, the company's busy season is from Lunar New Year's Day to Chuseok. The company's atmosphere becomes more relaxed after Chuseok. Many people take days off around the end of the year. My company's anniversary is close to Chuseok, so a luxury meat gift set is delivered to my house. Moreover, there is a bonus, so all the staff are happy. Chuseok's temperature is cool, and there are lots of foods. Therefore, Chuseok is my favorite holiday.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, MK!

It's nice to know that it feels like you have a long celebration of Chuseok. Also, reading your homework makes me imagine how fun and enjoyable this celebration is for you and the people in your company.

- T. Caitlyn

I really look forward to Chuseok.

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In general, the company's busy season is from Lunar New Year's Day to Chuseok.

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The company's atmosphere becomes more relaxed after Chuseok.

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Many people take days off around the end of the year.

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My company's anniversary is close to Chuseok, so a luxury meat gift set is delivered to my house.

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Moreover, there is a bonus, so all the staff are happy.

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Chuseok's temperature is cool, and there are lots of foods.

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Therefore, Chuseok is my favorite holiday.

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