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Would you rather have a stressful, high-paying job or a relaxed, low-paying job?

이진태/2024-06-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
It's a difficult question. If I could get very high-paying job, I would get a high-paying job. However, we should calculate relative proportion that how high-paying and how relaxed low-paying. If the pay differnence is small, I will choose relaxed low-paying job.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi JT! Thank you for sharing your opinion on which you'd rather choose. It's indeed a difficult choice to make.
~~Teacher Ryka^^

It's a difficult question.
>> CORRECT

If I could get very high-paying job, I would get a high-paying job.
>>If I could secure a very high-paying job, I would opt for it. 

However, we should calculate relative proportion that how high-paying and how relaxed low-paying.
>>However, we should consider the relative proportion of how high-paying the job is versus how relaxed a low-paying job might be. 

If the pay differnence is small, I will choose relaxed low-paying job.
>>If the pay difference is minimal, I would choose the relaxed, low-paying job.
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