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류건우/2024-06-12
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q: What are some advantages of going on vacation with friends?
A: I think one of the advantages of going on vacation with friends is the joy will be doubled.
Usually people tend to feel more excited when they're with someone who they usually hang with.
Also, they can count on each other when they have trouble during the vacation or trip.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!
2. Usually people tend to feel more excited when they're with someone who they usually hang with.
3. Also, they can count on each other when they have trouble during the vacation or trip.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina
Take note of the following considerations:
1. I think one of the advantages of going on vacation with friends is the joy will be doubled.
>>I think one of the advantages of going on vacation with friends is that the joy will be doubled.
2. Usually people tend to feel more excited when they're with someone who they usually hang with.
>>Usually, people tend to feel more excited when they're with someone who they usually hang out with.
3. Also, they can count on each other when they have trouble during the vacation or trip.
>>CORRECT!
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