Giving children hopeful messages is encouraged in many countries. However, I personally believe that we also think about pros as well as cons in terms of education. These days, in many schools, teachers try to teach children ways to get through hardship to get accomplishments. Growth mindset, is one of examples, describes a way of viewing challenges and hardship on tasks. It helps children have repsillience that is essential for great achievements. Therefore, children who learned the way to compensate failures are much more likely to have career they want. However, giving positive messages is not always key to success. In sports field only a few people can hold the spotlight. For instance, one of my colleagues prepared for the national running team until high school. However, he was injured during training and couldn’t make up a national athlete. Therefore, it's more important to know that even children try their best, they can still don’t make a good result.

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