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Share your movie review of the most recent movie you have seen

박혜연/2024-06-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I saw the movie that is “a crime town”. I’ve already said, this movie was exciting. My heart was pumped! And the movie main character is strongest in the movie story. By the way, an actor really looks like strongest, too. So i think this movie is cause famous.

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Hello there, Hye Yeon! It sounds like you had quite the thrilling experience watching "A Crime Town"! Thanks for sharing.

~T. Jenna

I saw the movie that is “a crime town”.

>>I watched the movie called 'A Crime Town'.

I’ve already said, this movie was exciting.

>>I’ve already said that this movie is exciting.

>> I've already mentioned that this movie is thrilling.

My heart was pumped!

Correct, or

>>My heart was racing with excitement!

And the movie main character is strongest in the movie story.

>>And, the main character in the movie is the strongest in the story.

>>The movie's main character stands out as the strongest in the story.

By the way, an actor really looks like strongest, too.

>>Also, the actor looks really strong too.

OR
>>By the way, the actor really portrays strength convincingly as well.

So i think this movie is cause famous.

>>So, I think this has made this movie famous.