In Korea, games are generally not played during office parties. In the past, when we had an office party at the department head's house, we played Yut, a traditional game, or a card game, a Western game. However, these days, office parties are usually held at restaurants, so instead of playing games, employees eat, drink, and talk to each other. During office parties, the topics of conversation mainly focus on the employees' family affairs, children's education, and marriage issues, and they tend to refrain from talking about company work. This is because during office parties, employees want to get away from work and have free time to enjoy themselves. Recently, I heard that global Korean companies were holding office parties in hotels and playing Western-style games.

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In Korea, games are generally not played during office parties.

>> Games are neved played during office parties in Korea.
In the past, when we had an office party at the department head's house, we played Yut, a traditional game, or a card game, a Western game.

>> We used to play a card game called Yut or another traditional games whenever we had an office party at our department head's house.
However, these days, office parties are usually held at restaurants, so instead of playing games, employees eat, drink, and talk to each other.

>> However these days, office parties typically take place at restaurants, so instead of engaging in competitive games, employees converse, eat, and drink.
During office parties, the topics of conversation mainly focus on the employees' family affairs, children's education, and marriage issues, and they tend to refrain from talking about company work.

>> When employees get together for a party, they usually avoid discussing business-related matters and instead focus on their personal lives, families, and children's education.
This is because during office parties, employees want to get away from work and have free time to enjoy themselves.

>> That's why, employees want a break from their jobs and time off to spend on personal interests.
Recently, I heard that global Korean companies were holding office parties in hotels and playing Western-style games.

>> It has come to my attention that multinational Korean corporations are hosting office parties in hotels and engaging in Western-style games.