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The important thing when buying something

윤우현/2024-06-12

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I don't think the price is the most important thing when buying something. I first consider my need for the items and the quality of the items.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good afternoon to you Sir Yun! You have a very engaging writing style which allows you to write short ideas with clarity and sophistication. Keep it up!

>>> TEACHER GEMMA

I don't think the price is that the most important thing when buying something.

>>> CORRECT~!^^

OR>>>I believe that the price is not necessarily the most crucial factor when making a purchase.

I first consider my need for the items and the quality of the items.

>>> CORRECT~!^^

OR>>> I evaluate both my necessity for the items and the standard of their quality.