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What are the dramas you wouldn't recommend others to watch? Why?

김명기/2024-06-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I wouldn't recommend magic dramas or adult-only dramas. Actually, magic dramas are interesting, but God doesn't like them. Jehovah hates people who practice black magic and white magic, so I think I should follow His will. Also, adult-only dramas should be watched by people who are over 19 years old. They contain a lot of bad scenes. For example, there are many fighting scenes, nudity, or criminal killing scenes. These scenes are shocking even to adults. Therefore, I think everyone should avoid these types of dramas.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, MK!

I see! Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this question. I completely understand that sometimes watching these dramas can influence others, so it's not very ideal to watch them.

- T. Caitlyn

I wouldn't recommend magic dramas or adult-only dramas.

>> CORRECT
Actually, magic dramas are interesting, but God doesn't like them.

>> CORRECT
Jehovah hates people who practice black magic and white magic, so I think I should follow His will.

>> CORRECT
Also, adult-only dramas should be watched by people who are over 19 years old.

>> CORRECT
They contain a lot of bad scenes.

>> CORRECT
For example, there are many fighting scenes, nudity, or criminal killing scenes.

>> They contain a lot of graphic scenes, such as fighting, nudity, or criminal acts.
These scenes are shocking even to adults.

>> CORRECT
Therefore, I think everyone should avoid these types of dramas.

>> Therefore, I believe everyone should avoid these types of dramas.