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류건우/2024-06-11
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Q: What are some of the things that we can learn from kids? from old people?
A: I think one of the things we can learn from kids is the creativity.
They have good imaginations because they don't know a lot of things about the world, and that's something people can learn.
I think people can learn a lot of things from the old because they've experienced a lot more things.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!
2. They have good imaginations because they don't know a lot of things about the world, and that's something people can learn.
3. I think people can learn a lot of things from the old because they've experienced a lot more things.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think one of the things we can learn from kids is the creativity.
>>I think one of the things we can learn from kids is creativity.
2. They have good imaginations because they don't know a lot of things about the world, and that's something people can learn.
>>They have good imagination because they don't know a lot of things about the world, and that's something people can learn.
3. I think people can learn a lot of things from the old because they've experienced a lot more things.
>>CORRECT!
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