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Which TV series made an impact in your life?

박혜연/2024-06-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think the impact series in my life are “she was pretty”and “Want to see”. Both series are drama. First series was funny and i think this drama convey people, “personality is more important to people”. And second series gave me motive that i wanted to design.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Hye Yeon! It's great to know about the impact these series had on you! "She Was Pretty" and "Want to See" seem to have left a lasting impression on you.

~T. Jenna

I think the impact series in my life are “she was pretty”and “Want to see”.

>>I think the impactful series in my life are "She Was Pretty" and "Want to See".

Both series are drama.

>>Both series are dramas.

First series was funny and i think this drama convey people, “personality is more important to people”.

>>The first series was funny, and I think this drama conveys the message that "personality is more important to people".

And second series gave me motive that i wanted to design.

>> On the other hand, the second series gave me the motivation to design.

>> On the other hand, the second series gave me the motivation to try designing.