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Success

양기연/2024-06-11

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

'Comfortable ' comes to my mind when I think about the word 'success '.And I can imagine that I can afford to travel what I want to. Also the word, 'donation ' comes to mind.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Gi Yean!

I agree! Comfort comes with success. Like what you mentioned during class, physical and mental comfortability show true success.

- T. Caitlyn

'Comfortable ' comes to my mind when I think about the word 'success '.

>> CORRECT

And I can imagine that I can afford to travel what I want to.

>> And I can imagine that I can afford to travel where I want to.

Also the word, 'donation ' comes to mind.

>> CORRECT