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What activities do you like doing alone?

김명기/2024-06-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

These days I am doing church work. I have many speeches and I should take care of many people. But these are also work, so I'm getting stressed out. When I want to relax, I work out or watch video clips from my wishlist dramas. It takes a lot of time to watch full dramas, so I tend to watch highlight videos on YouTube. If I watch these video clips, I am happy to talk to others about these topics.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, MK!

It's nice to know that you do church work. Also, it's interesting that you enjoy watching dramas. I hope these dramas help relieve your stress and make you feel relaxed. Fanstistic job with your sentences!
- T. Caitlyn

These days I am doing church work.

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I have many speeches and I should take care of many people.

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But these are also work, so I'm getting stressed out.

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When I want to relax, I work out or watch video clips from my wishlist dramas.

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It takes a lot of time to watch full dramas, so I tend to watch highlight videos on YouTube.

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If I watch these video clips, I am happy to talk to others about these topics.

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