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류건우/2024-06-10
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Q: What is the best topic/theme for a reality show? How about for a documentary?
A: I think the best theme for a reality show is entertaining show.
I think they also need other themes too, but when people turn on their TV, it's usually because they are bored.
And I think there's no best topic for a documentary because it just depends on a person who's watching it.
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Hi, Paul!
2. I think they also need other themes too, but when people turn on their TV, it's usually because they are bored.
3. And I think there's no best topic for a documentary because it just depends on a person who's watching it.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think the best theme for a reality show is entertaining show.
>>I think the best theme for a reality show is entertainment.
2. I think they also need other themes too, but when people turn on their TV, it's usually because they are bored.
>>I think they need other themes too, but when people turn on their TV, it's usually just because they are bored.
3. And I think there's no best topic for a documentary because it just depends on a person who's watching it.
>>Also, I think there's no best topic for a documentary because it just depends on the person who's watching it.
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