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Compromise points

양기연/2024-06-10

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Although I think two-way compromise is ideal, sometimes I choose quick compromise point in expense of my advantage or profit. First I don't want some disagreements or conflicts to delay my plans. And I am used to givers not receivers. I am more comfortable with losing something than getting one more. That's why I choose to give in my advantage and compromise quickly especially in financial issues.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Gi Yean!

I really admire your personality because I think not everyone can sacrifice and compromise as easily as you do. Hopefully, you gain more from those sacrifices and at least achieve peace of mind.

- T. Caitlyn

Although I think two-way compromise is ideal, sometimes I choose quick compromise point in expense of my advantage or profit.

>> Although I think two-way compromise is ideal, sometimes I choose a quick compromise point at the expense of my advantage or profit.

First I don't want some disagreements or conflicts to delay my plans.

>> CORRECT

And I am used to givers not receivers.

>> And I am used to being a giver, not a receiver.

I am more comfortable with losing something than getting one more.

>> CORRECT

That's why I choose to give in my advantage and compromise quickly especially in financial issues.

>> That's why I choose to give up my advantage and compromise quickly, especially in financial issues.