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What do you do when you feel awful?

차유진/2024-06-09

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When I see awful things I cover my eyes with hands. When I feel awful because I eat terrible food, I spit it
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello again, Yale!

Here's your corrected essay from the homework last week. Please go over the minor revisions below, such as "spit out". Enjoy your evening! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




                                What do you do when you feel awful?


When I see awful things I cover my eyes with hands.
>> When I see awful things I cover my eyes with my hands.

When I feel awful because I eat terrible food, I spit it.
>> When I feel awful because I eat terrible food, I spit it out. 

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