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Sometimes, simple-ignorant is best

임성준/2024-06-08

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How do you typically deal with procrastination? Do you have any strategies for overcoming it? >>> At first, I don't make any appointment with friends by deadline. Except for GF LOL. Secondly, I try not to watch for phone. Because there are too many funny things in the phone, If you don't, your times may fly. But sometimes I failed to put the phone, so I downloaded new application on the phone. The name is "The timer brooding passion". The manual is, If I put a button in app for starting study, It locks my phone and It counts my studying time. It even bans to call or be called. Using this app, I cannot watch for phone when I'm studying and at the end of study, I can feel rewarding watching my studying time. It maybe looks simple-ignorant but is great tool for people like me who is mobile phone addict.

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Hello, Brian! Thanks for sharing your strategy! It sounds like a smart way to stay focused. I might give that app a try too. 😄

~ Teacher Maxine

At first, I don't make any appointment with friends by deadline. Except for GF LOL.

>> Initially, I don't make appointments with friends by deadline, except for my GF LOL.

Secondly, I try not to watch for phone. Because there are too many funny things in the phone, If you don't, your times may fly.

>> Secondly, I try not to constantly check my phone because there are too many amusing distractions on it. If you don't control it, your time may fly by.

But sometimes I failed to put the phone, so I downloaded new application on the phone.

>> However, sometimes I fail to resist the temptation, so I downloaded a new application on my phone.

The name is "The timer brooding passion".

>> The app is called "The Timer: Brooding Passion."

The manual is, If I put a button in app for starting study, It locks my phone and It counts my studying time.

>> The manual states that if I press a button in the app to start studying, it locks my phone and counts my study time.

It even bans to call or be called.

>> It even prevents me from making or receiving calls.

Using this app, I cannot watch for phone when I'm studying and at the end of study, I can feel rewarding watching my studying time.

>> By using this app, I can't distract myself with my phone while studying, and at the end of my study session, I feel rewarded seeing my productive studying time.

It maybe looks simple-ignorant but is great tool for people like me who is mobile phone addict.

>> It may seem simple or even naïve, but it's a great tool for people like me who are addicted to their mobile phones.