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How to handle situations with disagreement

양기연/2024-06-07

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I try to talk about my ideas and plans before I challenge something. And I ask for any advice or suggestions from the people involved with my challenges. This way I get their appreciation and support. When there are some disagreement or concerns about my plans or challenges, I try to handle the situations by convincing those who don't agree with me. That is why I have never experienced severe disagreement while challenging something new.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Happy Friday, Gi Yean!

It's nice to know that if there are conflicts or disagreements with the challenges you encounter, you face them head-on and try to resolve the issue as soon as possible. I think this approach prevents further conflicts.

- T. Caitlyn

I try to talk about my ideas and plans before I challenge something.

>> CORRECT

And I ask for any advice or suggestions from the people involved with my challenges.

>> CORRECT

This way I get their appreciation and support.

>> CORRECT

When there are some disagreement or concerns about my plans or challenges, I try to handle the situations by convincing those who don't agree with me.

>>When there are disagreements or concerns about my plans or challenges, I try to handle the situations by convincing those who don't agree with me.

That is why I have never experienced severe disagreement while challenging something new.

>> CORRECT