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장지혁/2024-06-06

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

How do you define success? I think success is when I'm happy and it continues

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Henry!

That's a good point. Happiness is definitely a key part of success. ^^

~ Teacher Maxine

I think success is when I'm happy and it continues.

>> CORRECT

OR >> I believe that true success is maintaining happiness consistently.