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What is the impression you want your audience to take away from your speech?
박순호/2024-06-06
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I have participated in many speeches as an audience member and have received many impressions from them.
There were times when it was a powerful memory that I would never forget, and there were times when I felt a sense of disappointment that it was a waste of time.
Because the audience takes time out of their busy schedules to participate, they will hope to get what they want.
The first impression I want the audience to get from my speech is the speaker's confidence. I believe that a speaker's self-confidence increases the audience's trust in the speech and increases immersion.
Next, I want the audience to get the impression that I am an excellent expert on the topic of my speech.
And I hope the audience can feel my strong passion that does not tire me out throughout the speech.
And lastly, I want to be impressed that my public speaking skills are also excellent.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Thank you, Sun!
Making a strong first impression helps you grab your audience's attention and keep them interested all throughout your presentation. Plus, it helps build your credibility as a speaker. Always remember that first impressions last, so make yours count.
- Kristine ^^
I have participated in many speeches as an audience member and have received many impressions from them.
>> As a part of the audience,I have attended many speeches and have learned a lot from them.
There were times when it was a powerful memory that I would never forget, and there were times when I felt a sense of disappointment that it was a waste of time.
There were times when it was a powerful memory that I would never forget, and there were times when I felt a sense of disappointment that it was a waste of time.
>> There were moments when it was an unforgettable experience that I would never let go of, and there were other moments when I felt let down that it was a waste of time.
Because the audience takes time out of their busy schedules to participate, they will hope to get what they want.
Because the audience takes time out of their busy schedules to participate, they will hope to get what they want.
>> The audience will be hoping to receive what they want since they are willing to take part despite their busy schedules.
The first impression I want the audience to get from my speech is the speaker's confidence. I believe that a speaker's self-confidence increases the audience's trust in the speech and increases immersion.
The first impression I want the audience to get from my speech is the speaker's confidence. I believe that a speaker's self-confidence increases the audience's trust in the speech and increases immersion.
>> I want my speech to leave the listener with the feeling that the speaker is confident. I think that self-assurance in a speaker boosts immersion and the audience's faith in the discourse.
Next, I want the audience to get the impression that I am an excellent expert on the topic of my speech.
Next, I want the audience to get the impression that I am an excellent expert on the topic of my speech.
>> Next, I want the audience to believe that I am a highly knowledgeable expert on the subject matter of my speech.
And I hope the audience can feel my strong passion that does not tire me out throughout the speech.
And I hope the audience can feel my strong passion that does not tire me out throughout the speech.
>> Additionally, I hope the audience can sense my deep feelings, which keeps me from becoming weary during the speech.
And lastly, I want to be impressed that my public speaking skills are also excellent.
And lastly, I want to be impressed that my public speaking skills are also excellent.
>> Lastly, I would like to impress you with my outstanding public speaking abilities.
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