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장지혁/2024-06-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I don't agree this lesson quote because most of time I can win with hard work but sometimes I can't win althought I do with hard work.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Henry! I get where you're coming from. Working hard is important, but sometimes, even if we try our best, we might not succeed. Things outside our control can affect what happens. But what really matters is to keep going and learn from both good and bad times. Every experience helps us grow stronger in the end.
~ Teacher Maxine 

I don't agree this lesson quote because most of time I can win with hard work but sometimes I can't win althought I do with hard work.
>> I don't agree with this lesson quote because most of the time I can win with hard work, but sometimes I can't win even though I put in hard work.
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