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류건우/2024-06-05

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Q: Which is better in taking photos/videos, a real camera or a phone? Why? A: I think a real camera is better. I think they have their own advantages, for a real camera, they can take a picture in a higher resolution. For phone, people can bring them easily because they are smaller and lighter.

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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some considerations:

1. I think a real camera is better.

>>CORRECT!

2. I think they have their own advantages, for a real camera, they can take a picture in a higher resolution.

>>I think they have their own advantages, but a real camera can take a picture in a higher resolution.

3. For phone, people can bring them easily because they are smaller and lighter.

>>As for phones, people can bring them easily because they are smaller and lighter.