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What makes it easy/difficult to land a high-paying job in your country?

박혜연/2024-06-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
It is difficult. Because everything in Korea is expensive. But we are difficult finding a job. And this job isn’t high-paying.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Hye Yeon! I know it's tough when everything feels expensive and the job market doesn't seem to cooperate. But every obstacle is a chance to grow stronger. Keep pushing forward. You've got this!
~T. Jenna

It is difficult. 
Correct, or
>> Well, it can be challenging to land a high-paying job in South Korea.
Because everything in Korea is expensive. 
>>This is because everything in Korea is expensive.
But we are difficult finding a job. 
>>But, it is difficult to find a well-compensated position.
And this job isn’t high-paying.
>> If we do find one, it is not high-paying.
OR
>>If we do find one, it may not offer sufficient compensation relative to the high cost of living.
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