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What does art mean to you personally?

박소은/2024-06-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
when I was in high school to prepare for college. And Entering the college, I fell in love with art and design. Art makes my life more colorful and meaningful.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Thank you for doing your homework, Anna! It sounds like your journey from high school to college brought you to a passion for art and design! It's wonderful how art can enrich our lives in such meaningful ways.
~Kelly^^
when I was in high school to prepare for college.
>> When I was in high school, I prepared for college.
And Entering the college, I fell in love with art and design.
>> Upon entering college, I fell in love with art and design.
Art makes my life more colorful and meaningful.
>> Correct
OR:
>>Art adds vibrancy and purpose to my life.
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