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Challenges next generation will face with

양기연/2024-06-05

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I think the climate change is one of the biggest challenges for next generations. We now suffer from that problem, but we don't have any solutions to cope with the problem. We try to do small things such as reducing plastics or planting, but it is not enough. The issue of global warming and climate change has become so big that it has become the most serious challenge for the present and future generations.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Gi Yean!

Thank you for doing your homework. Absolutely! Climate change is a very big problem that both current and future generations are facing. The reality is very sad because even if we exert effort to delay climate change, not everyone has the same goal or is willing to sacrifice convenience for it.

- T. Caitlyn

I think the climate change is one of the biggest challenges for next generations.

>> I think climate change is one of the biggest challenges for future generations.

We now suffer from that problem, but we don't have any solutions to cope with the problem.

>> CORRECT

We try to do small things such as reducing plastics or planting, but it is not enough.

>> CORRECT

The issue of global warming and climate change has become so big that it has become the most serious challenge for the present and future generations.

>> CORRECT