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임성준/2024-06-05
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
How do you plan to prepare for your upcoming move to a new location?
>>> For selected internship members from other colleges, college where I will go prepares our domitary for a month period. So I will just bring my notebook and basic clothes. The other things for living will be there. Original internship period is started on June 24th but I have a exam that same day. The result that I contact with persons concerned with internship is just starting internship on June 25th. He said it will not be huge disadvantage. I will find new proper point where we will talk.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hello, Brian!
It's great to hear that the college is preparing the dormitory for you. Hope you will have a great stay!
~ Teacher Maxine
>> For selected internship members from other colleges, the college where I will go prepares our dormitory for a month period. So, I will just bring my notebook and basic clothes.
The other things for living will be there.
>> The other necessities for living will be provided there.
Original internship period is started on June 24th but I have a exam that same day.
>> The original internship period starts on June 24th, but I have an exam that same day.
The result that I contact with persons concerned with internship is just starting internship on June 25th.
>> The result of my contact with persons concerned with the internship is that it will start on June 25th.
He said it will not be huge disadvantage.
>> He said it will not be a huge disadvantage.
I will find new proper point where we will talk.
>> I will find a new suitable point where we can talk.
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