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What do you think is the best pet in the world? Why?

차유진/2024-06-04

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I think the best pet is hamster in the world because hamster is cute and most people like that. Hamster makes me feel good, so we become friends.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good evening there, Yale!

Here's your corrected essay from the homework on Monday. Please go over the revisions provided. Enjoy your evening! 


Cheers,
Jean~~



                              What do you think is the best pet in the world? Why?


I think the best pet is hamster in the world because hamster is cute and most people like that.
>> I think the best pet in the world is a hamster because it's cute and most people like it. 

Hamster makes me feel good, so we become friends.
>> Hamsters make me feel good so we can become friends. 

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