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2024.06.03

남미례/2024-06-04

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HO DO YOU THINK WOULD BE A BETTER SUPERVISOR, A MAN OR A WOMAN? I think that a man is notbad. On the other hand, I think that a woman is better. I think woman is take care a child and go to the work Therefore, I really think that a woman is better
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Ms. Nami! Thank you for this wonderful answer. Although both genders exert efforts, a woman's task is never done. Let's hope for gender equality. See you again!
--Teacher Anji

I think that a man is not bad. 
>> CORRECT
On the other hand, I think that a woman is better. 
>> CORRECT
I think woman is take care a child and go to the work.
>> I think a woman can take care of a child and go to work.
 Therefore, I really think that a woman is better.
>> CORRECT
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