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김지숙/2024-06-04

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I once invited my friends to my house. I invited my friends and played board games at home and played games using TV. I also had a snack with them.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thanks for the effort, Shin Woo! You have been showing great improvement. Keep it up!

- Teacher Angela

I once invited my friends to my house.

>> CORRECT

I invited my friends and played board games at home and played games using TV.

>> I invited my friends over and played board games at home, and we also played games using the TV.

I also had a snack with them.

>> CORRECT