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What is traditional food in your country?

김명기/2024-06-03

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I want to introduce 2 foods. One is chicken soup, and the other is Kimbob. Chicken soup is a very popular food in summer, and foreigners like it too. I especially like the muddy-style soup, which has lots of nuts. The restaurant's name is Gobong or Tosokchon. Kimbob is also a globally popular food. I saw the news that many people buy ice Kimbob in America. Kimbob is tasty and simple. In addition, it is healthy.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, MK!

Thank you for doing your homework. I've tried eating Kimbap and I really like it, but I haven't tried Samgyetang yet, so I'm looking forward to trying it soon.

- T. Caitlyn

I want to introduce 2 foods.

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One is chicken soup, and the other is Kimbob.

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Chicken soup is a very popular food in summer, and foreigners like it too.

>> Chicken soup is very popular in the summer, and foreigners like it too.
I especially like the muddy-style soup, which has lots of nuts.

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The restaurant's name is Gobong or Tosokchon.

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Kimbob is also a globally popular food.

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I saw the news that many people buy ice Kimbob in America.

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Kimbob is tasty and simple.

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In addition, it is healthy.

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