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~ Writing Task: Please answer the question: In your opinion, what punishments should be given to people who hurt animals? Animal abuse is much less than before, but there are still happen animal abuse. In my country also have a low about animal abuse, but there are very a few cases go to jail. The reason why most of them get suspended sentences, or get a small fine. So many people saying that the South Korea animal law is too weak. And there are many sad points. The abused animals and abandoned animals go to animal shelters. But, they don't have enough space in the shelter, so finish the period of time, the animals are euthanized. So I want people who abuse animals and abandoned animals to get huge fine or go to jail.
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Hi, Keon!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
In your opinion, what punishments should be given to people who hurt animals?


Animal abuse is much less than before, but there are still happen animal abuse.
>> Animal abuse is much less than before, but there are still animal abuse
cases that happen these days.
In my country also have a low about animal abuse, but there are very a few cases go to jail.
>> In my country, there is also a law about animal abuse, but there are very a few cases where criminals go to jail.
The reason why most of them get suspended sentences, or get a small fine.
>> That's the reason why most of them get suspended, or pay a small fine.
So many people saying that the South Korea animal law is too weak.
>> Many people say that the law about animal welfare in South Korea is too weak.
And there are many sad points.
>> CORRECT!
The abused animals and abandoned animals go to animal shelters.
>> CORRECT!
But, they don't have enough space in the shelter, so finish the period of time, the animals are euthanized.
>> But, they don't have enough space in the shelter, so after a period of time, the animals are euthanized.
So I want people who abuse animals and abandoned animals to get a huge fine or go to jail.
>> CORRECT!