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류건우/2024-06-03
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q: What are the benefits of taking photos and/or videos?
A: I think one of the benefits of taking photos and videos is it can store a memory for a long time.
Even if it's not a memory, it's good to store some data by photos or videos because it's easy to understand with those.
Also, it's good to show others.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!
2. Even if it's not a memory, it's good to store some data by photos or videos because it's easy to understand with those.
3. Also, it's good to show others.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I think one of the benefits of taking photos and videos is it can store a memory for a long time.
>>CORRECT!
2. Even if it's not a memory, it's good to store some data by photos or videos because it's easy to understand with those.
>>Even if it's not a memory, it's good to store some data by taking photos or videos because it's easy to understand with those.
3. Also, it's good to show others.
>>Also, it's good to show them to others.
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